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Jeremiah was a great storyteller, but as soon as Ellie went to college, she changed. One of them being not wanting to hear all the stories he used to tell her. It was right after Ellie went back to school that Grandpa Jeremiah had a stroke, and Macon started coming around. And just about the time, Ellie came from school the, next summer his health started to deteriorate. Dr. Crawford said he had maybe a week or two at best, and from this news, everyone was devastated. And the whole family would start helping poor grandpa Jeremiah. While Macon would hang around more due to Jeremiah and his stories. But the family was concerned about him doing this rather than him resting, and that this would affect his health. But the doctor told them to allow grandpa because if it makes him feel better, it would be the greatest medicine for him. And soon, everyone started getting closer as a family as the end was coming near for grandpa Jeremiah. And soon ended up grieving together after his passing.

Answer: Jeremiah was a great storyteller, but as soon as Ellie went to college, she changed. One of them is not wanting to hear all the stories he used to tell her. It was right after Ellie went back to school that Grandpa Jeremiah had a stroke, and Macon started coming around. And just about the time, Ellie came from school the, next summer his health started to deteriorate. Dr. Crawford said he had maybe a week or two at best, and from this news, everyone was devastated. And the whole family would start helping poor grandpa Jeremiah. While Macon would hang around more due to Jeremiah and his stories. But the family was concerned about him doing this rather than him resting, and that this would affect his health. But the doctor told them to allow grandpa because if it makes him feel better, it would be the greatest medicine for him. And soon, everyone started getting closer as a family as the end was coming near for grandpa Jeremiah. And soon ended up grieving together after his passing.

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daphne8125 daphne8125 · Answer 2 · 2025-04-01T02:50:45-04:00

Ellie’s grandpa, Jeremiah, was a great storyteller, but as soon as Ellie went to college, she changed. One change being that she didn’t want to hear all the stories he used to tell her. It was shortly after Ellie went back to school that Grandpa Jeremiah had a stroke, and the Macon started coming around. Around this time, Ellie came from school. The next summer is health began to deteriorate. Dr. Crawford said he had a week or two at best, and everyone was devastated by this news. The whole family started helping poor Grandpa Jeremiah. Macon started hanging around more for Jeremiah’s stories. But the family was concerned that this would interfere with his rest, and therefore his health. The doctor allowed it, saying that it would make him happy, which was the best medicine. Soon, everyone started getting closer as a family as the end was coming nearer for grandpa Jeremiah. They grieved together after his passing.

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