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In his poem "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," William Wadsworth used imagery to convey his feelings about nature. One of his phrases was "golden daffodils," and he even used the word "fluttering and leaping in the wind." “A host, of golden daffodils; beside the lake, beneath the trees, Fluttering and dancing in the breeze,” he writes, implying that he sees nature as alive. He uses terms like "fluttering" and "dancing" to describe what he sees. He explains his heart overflowing with joy and dancing with the daffodils by saying, "And then my heart with pleasure fills, and dances with the daffodils." He is overjoyed to be in the presence of nature, which fills his heart with joy.