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please HELP....What is the best way to correct the parallelism in this sentence?
She had a lovely house, many friends, and her body of work was impressive.

A. She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
B. Her house was lovely, and she had many friends and an impressive body of work.
C. She had a lovely house, where she entertained many friends and where her
impressive body of work was created.
D. She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.

Answer :

I believe it is A because the others are run on sentences.

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